Everyone's a Critic

Well perhaps not everyone, but these people seem to be: DeepGenre. They maintain a section entitled "13-Line Critiques". You submit the opening of your short story, and they post it with a bit of a critical review. Others may then comment on your material as well.

In the spirit of open and unbiased criticism, I've submitted the opening lines of "The Twisting" and "Death in the Family" for their review. I'll post a link to the results here.